Showing posts with label elf girl. Show all posts
Showing posts with label elf girl. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Because character limits are gay.

Here's the rest of the description and the music list for the scenes in Sacreia's chapter:

This is a standalone chapter from my upcoming book, Nihilos Draconum: Rise of a Warrior. It is meant to be a preview of my writing style, and as a means of gaining interest in the book before it is published. As well as gaining a fan base beforehand. The chapter starts off slow, and since this part isn't explained and has a habit of confusing people. The events transpiring in the chapter are being viewed from a Crystal Ball. It entails the life of one of the more important characters in the would be series, Sacreia Valen. It starts off slow, as it begins with her mother and a little history of the elves. It goes down to how Sacreia was conceived, and what was the result of her birth.

Being born a half red dragon half elf caused her mother's exile and eventual decline. Aneia(Her mother) was capture by humans and became a sex slave to them for 12 years. All the while Sacreia had to watch as they violated her mother. For years she did not know what they were doing to her, she only knew they were hurting her. The humans who enslaved them were not very accepting of Sacreia, referring to her as a child with demon eyes. For those almond shaped eyes would stare up at them with a fierce luminosity, one that spelled a hatred so strong it made them shiver.

Aneia eventually takes her own life, as she was unable to live with her every day torture. In turn, she leaves her daughter with parting words. To be free, and live the life she could not. Sacreia did not know the concept of death, and as her mother's still cooling body lay trembling in her death throes, Sacreia understood. Her personality splits, and it is here her life changes. Sacreia's personalities were opposite of one another. One who craved love, family, and friendship. The other a misanthropic, homicidal, and vengeful entity hellbent on destroying humanity. All those she gets close to either die, or leave her. She has not known any real happiness in her life, for hers is one filled with despair, rage, loneliness, betrayal and unrequited love.

After a time, she becomes known as The Crimson Whirlwind, a mass murderer who leaves naught in her wake but the unrecognizable remains of her victims. For she travels the lands far and wide simply to slaughter every human city and village she can find. If the world will not accept her for what she is, she will create a new world by force. Sacreia's character has inspirations from the character Lucy/Kaede from the Elfen Lied anime, as such some specific scenes in the chapter are similar. The character takes a lot from myself, as do several of my other characters. This makes her more easy to relate to, and in turn makes her feel more... "human".  The chapter itself is filled with sadness, gore, extreme violence, and the one thing I wrote most: action packed battles. The battles in the books follow "anime physics". What does this mean? It simply means that protagonists are able to be hit by overly powerful attacks and not explode on impact which would happen in reality. Instead, they're sent flying while taking damage. Whereas other characters(Side characters, things meant to die) would follow real world physics where they'd die/explode in a single blow from something stupidly powerful. Imagine being crushed/stomped on by a 80 foot tall dragon. Wouldn't you be crushed into paste? Not protagonists!

My writing is meant to make you think, as I don't throw everything at you. Things are hinted at, and meant to be perceived. If you fail to pay attention to something, you will be lost later on. Such as learning Sacreia's true name in the chapter, and a certain connection she has with a specific character. Almost every scene has a song attached to it, to add a bit of "life" to it. Below, I shall add a few songs for specific scenes.

The beginning, everything Aneia up until she meets a certain man and is brought further into the forest: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyxxiAYvdNs

When Aneia is stuck with said man in the forest, and the scene when Sacreia finally meets said man later on: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7IwRkFyUu60

When Sacreia enters the Void(The area covered in darkness) and when she tortures/kills her first human: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PwtWSNXStEc or http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxuUAJ1OSms (I used the Elfen Lied one)

When she first meets Ryu, and every scene for their childhood: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWW8DMpfI9U (Or any variation of it)

When Sacreia goes to save a Nerokois girl from slavers, and in general when she kills people in large quantities: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFRCdfIGVvg

Sacreia's battle against Bounty Hunter Eilara: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_W_VST7pypA

The Mt Gotora Scene where Sacreia sits atop a snowy cliff: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jLFg30ACkY0

Sacreia's battle against her father(Phase 1) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B7Hikaj8ub0 (Phase 2) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71aDQ3go96M

Sacreia's battle against the one she loves most:(Phase 1) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4PABl-OUKg (Can also be used for the scene after their battle has concluded. This was used for Ryu's version of the battle in the previous chapter. Both chapters have the same fight, but from different perspectives.) or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H-2CENbg61w (Which I originally used) (Phase 2-3) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBb0HfSSlcE

For the scene after the battle with the one she loves most has concluded: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iF8I-nc5Hog or the song mentioned above.

There you have it, a pseudo list of all songs I used in the making of that chapter. I hope you enjoy.

Thursday, January 23, 2014

A short.

I may be writing a small draft of the prequel story set 500,000 years prior to the book series' plot which delves into the history of two specific gods. Who weren't really true gods at all. Of course, I won't actually be finishing the draft itself; since I intend to finish it once the series has been concluded. By that time people should/will be confused about the characters that appear in the series who were present in the prequel. It will also shed some light of how the plot is basically a tragic tale of two lovers who could never be together. Instead, they die and are reborn over and over. An eternity of strife between each other, where at the end they must kill one another. Only to be reborn again and begin the cycle anew.

Here's a hint though:

 


Sacreia has raven black hair here, and no longer possesses her half breed markings. That's about as much as hint I'll give.

Sunday, December 29, 2013

Origin of Miyuki

Miyuki was one of the last characters loosely based off someone I know. Her outfit was also designed by the person with her somewhat limited artistic abilities. Much like the woman she's based on, Miyuki's eye color changes with her mood. Whereupon being angry/upset it will go from the normal icy blue to a steel/gray coloration. Being the only elven character in the group, she causes Ryu some discomfort seeing as she bears somewhat of a similar appearance to both Sacreia and her mother Aneia.

The character Kai is infatuated with her much to her dismay. She is the oldest character in the group being over 200. During her enslavement by Wyrmlord Atreloch, her mind has been twisted to the point that those with dragon blood within them bear an irresistible allure to her. Which causes her to fall for Ryu, going so far as to offer herself to him only to be rejected. Why it is she doesn't fall for Kai who also possesses dragon blood would most likely have to do with him having the inferior blood in comparison to Ryu.

Miyuki is the cliche elven archer, however she is also a priest. What does this remind you of?
That's exactly where I got the idea for her bow from. Miyuki comes off as a rather guarded and level headed woman otherwise. Although not every character is perfect, and has little issues that aren't mentioned until the end of the book where each of them is... Well, I won't spoil that. But let's just say their most guarded secrets about themselves is exposed before something happens to them. Miyuki doesn't really represent anything yet, or rather haven't assigned anything to her yet.